Darkness james power

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Your name/alias would be; dark
And you're how old?;14
Your gender?;male
What's your RP experience?; played on loads of sites kh sites and love rp
How did you find us?;from another site
How can we find you?;[e-mail]
Do you have any other characters on this site?;[no
Anything Else?;
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`That's all changed into lies that drop like acid rain
the basics

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`It's like you're a demon I can't face down
appearance

[/B] it's all in the details with this honeys. If you want to impress us, put it in distinctive features format. Really, i would say at least 3 meaty paragraphs.

go here for the image i40.photobucket.com/.../a_MAN_by_heise.jpg
or here i40.photobucket.com/albums/e205/kitekatolia/a_MAN_by_heise.jpg
anything else?;
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`I can tell you're lying when your lips move
personality

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reality
history
reading
writing
friends

dislikes; at least 15
sports
science
evil
darkness
fighting

strengths; at least 5
loyal
friendly
nice
strong
listens

weaknesses; at least 5
annoying
talkative
suspicious
judgmental
his darkness

fears;
wasps
evil
losing

hopes;
for love
for light to be preserved
to rid of evil

best memory; short
his best memory is when he killed his evil brother in a fight between evil and light h won just about he was happy that he killed somebody evil
worst memory; short
a near death experience he was nearly killed when fighting his evil cousin and has all ways hated it he was stabbed through the cheek and he still has the scar.
overall; (this is more important than appearance, we want to see what your character is going to be like. give us heaps of detail and don't hold back. canons, we will be strict about this especially. at least 4 meaty paragraphs)

He would like to kill all evil he comes from a family of evil but is the only good person there so it makes him very suspicious of everyone around him and very judgmental which makes very nervous when he meets people

he likes to fight for light and hates anyone who would wish to destroy it he sometimes goes out at night to hunt for any evil that might be lurking about he wishes that someday that there will never be any darkness again

even though he his good there is a certain evil in his heart which can be unleashed at any time an on any one but usually when he get very angry his dark side comes out which can be very bad for those around him.

He is a very talkative person which is very bad as he can give away a lot of secrets and stuff that he does not want others to know but he is very bad at love so he his not a very good chatter upper.

anything else?;
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`What made you think you'd have it your way?
history

[/B] full name and a few short scentences about their relationship
samanther merry power she is very evil and hates her son along with his farther Samuel jerry power they wish to kill him and would rather kill all light

siblings; full name and a few short scentences about their relationship
he has none he killed them all
other family; full name and a few short scentences about their relationship
he killed them all to


history; (don't hold back at all with this. give us all the details your brain can posibly squeeze out. it usually depends on the character, but we sayminimum of 4-5 meaty paragraphs. more is always highly apreciated)

when he was born it was prophesied that dark would be the downfall of his family so he was always treated nastily wich was one thing that brought about him being good

when he was 5 he found out about light and darkness he would always sit on the roof trying to decided what was better when one day he could see in the stars a sign of light this made him decied which siled the fate of his family.

when he was 10 he was ready to make his escape from his family and kill the lesser of them he challenged his brother uncle and cousin
to a battle of the death he fought them one one one he killed his brother and uncle from quick witted skill when he tried to kill his cousin which nearly ended up in his death

he now has run away from his family and wishes to kill them all and kill any one in the darkness or who is evil and shuns light and wishes to destroy it.

anything else?;
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`I'm the king of this pity party with my jewel encrusted crown
last few details

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roleplay sample; now, the rest of the app can show your amazing understanding of the character, but it means nothing if you can't put it into practice! if you want to impress us, put one of the character you're applying for, but if you don't have time an example of one of your average posts from another site is fine. remember, longer is not always better.
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Sample Post: dark walked down the ally of hallow bastion all was quite since the darkness had taken over and destroyed half the planets he was relley annoyed he was just about to walk into the building when 10 heartless appeared out of nowhere he jumped up bring his ketblade down into a spinning twirl splitting one in half the others he jumped back and used fire wind the tornado rushed at the heartless killing them all
"gosh where do these guys came from" he walked into the bulding thinking about the war to come.
(UM the hearles are from another site)

[` melodie destiny chapman]

`denied
feel free to try for another character

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Ok, there are two slight problems with the character itself.

1) Miley Cyrus is a girl, not a boy

2) No human being has red eyes, unless glare cuahgt them on a camera.

And, he is a human, no? Well, there are no Light & Evil between humans, no, people can be mean and do things like stab people through the cheek, but, you can't call a human evil, or good, in the sense that they are neutral in this forum. The Angels are the Light, and the Demons are the evil. They can take sides, if they knew who one was, but they would only know if a demon/angel told them.

There were also quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the application.

Really: correct spelling
relley: your spelling

Also, when we ask for 4 - 5 meaty paragraphs, it means 6 - 8 sentences a a paragraph, not 1 - 2 sentences, then move on. And in the likes and dislikes, it clearly stated '15', you put five.
In appearance, we wanted you to describe the characters' looks, putting a picture was fine, as long as you also had the description. But, you didn't. The same thing for appearance, you put 1 - 2 sentences for each paragraph.

Not to mention countless grammatical mistakes.

And, this is just a personal note from me, but, there was no 'Dark' in Kingdom Hearts. And, this is how 'heartless' is spelled.

Though, this is just from me, I'm not going to judge for Ashlei and Lucy, I don't know them in and out, like I do myself [amazing, huh?! I know myself!] So, if they accept you, then they can overpower me.

Sorry!
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[dark]

then can i redo this as a angel please or devil

[` melodie destiny chapman]

Unless you want a canon, nope.

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[dark]

well if i create another chracter can i use the same picture

[` melodie destiny chapman]

The admins would prefer it to be a human being, not anime.

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[dark]

i thought it was human i even typed that in it looks nothing like anime